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As the World Falls Down by *l-Reflet-Palissant-l:iconl-Reflet-Palissant-l:

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Drawing of Sarah from the movie "Labyrinth". The infamous Ballroom Scene!

Done in charcoal and graphite.

Original: [link]

There's a crookedness in the face that my eyes can't seem to sort out. D =

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~HoorayForSeymour Aug 28, 2008, 8:21:53 AM
I think the left side of her nose should be a little longer, that might make he face look more natural. I really like her necklace :D

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~shanadian Aug 28, 2008, 11:50:24 AM
For the second time today:

Whoaaaaaaa....

Critique?? Eh, I'll chance to give it.

The neck looks longer than it should be because it needs to be a bit wider.
Her pupils are a bit large, too. Makes me feel like whatever she's looking at is about to eat her.

Her nose isn't perfect, but I couldn't even do as well so I can't very well say anything about it. Maybe the shading should have been a bit more shapely? It's a little rectangle-shaped, but in the photo, it's concave.

Meanwhile, I think the picture is overall AWESOME.
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*l-Reflet-Palissant-l Aug 30, 2008, 5:01:41 AM
He is about to eat her. = P

Yeah, I definitely see what you're saying about the nose though. It looks a bit angle-ish, and there is a bit of thinness in the neck that shouldn't be there.

Thanks for the critique hon. = ] Glad you like it!

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*l-Reflet-Palissant-l Aug 30, 2008, 5:04:19 AM
That must be what I haven't been seeing. I have so much trouble with noses. @_@

Thanks so much! <3

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*l-Reflet-Palissant-l Aug 30, 2008, 5:06:12 AM
Thanks. = ] I'm going to try to upload a non-blurry picture later. After I'm done moving.

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~shanadian Aug 30, 2008, 6:43:28 AM
Really? She /is/ about to be eaten? My rabbit is about to eat ME.
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~HoorayForSeymour Aug 30, 2008, 8:03:14 AM
No problem :)

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*l-Reflet-Palissant-l Aug 30, 2008, 2:37:52 PM
Mwuhahahaha.

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